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Re: Unloved- Chapter 1 Savior (edited)
This is really good. But you need to build up to the part where she is panicking. Also I thought the part near the end was good. Good job. =]
Jun 3, 2008
This is really good. But you need to build up to the part where she is panicking. Also I thought the part near the end was good. Good job. =]
Jun 3, 2008
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